Ode To A Solitary Mind Comments

Though variously we appear We are fragments of oneness .So dear leave your loneliness And mix in milieu with happiness. Ratnakar ji, very thoughtfully and beautifully written in this poem. We have to realise that we are a minute part of the whole.......10

its a wonderful message sir. bit loneliness is the viral disease which has spread rapidly in this century. finding the antidote i.e- happiness is a tough task to do...

Your dwarfness which is real! Nice work.

Look at the sunrays all over Arose from one Sun but they cover The world. Smell the scent of a flower Hidden in leaves but it still appears With smell upto you oh dear. Though variously we appear We are fragments of oneness .So dear leave your loneliness And mix in milieu with happiness. A great suggestion to a reader to get away from loneliness and remain happy. very nice comparison of the sun and its rays spreading and the scent of the rose. thank you very much. tony