Thursday, November 3, 2011

Ode To A Solitary Mind - 3 Comments

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</>Quite troubled one lifts eyebrows
Upon a crow and a stone he throws
To drive the crow far away
So the trouble he can sway
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Ratnakar Mandlik
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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 November 2018

An impressive write on irritated mind so nicely and touchingly executed. Beautiful poem.

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Valsa George 15 April 2016

When in trouble, we release our irritation through some impulsive act. Instead of allowing our mind to be disturbed, imagine something pleasurable, perhaps a sweet song by a bird might change our mental state from disturbance to sheer joy. Nature always offers a pleasing solution. A fine poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 March 2016

To drive the crow far away! Nice piece of work.

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