Tuesday, March 1, 2016

Ode To A Snail Comments

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Slug or Snail
Slow you trail
The slimy path you leave
upon bark or rail
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Simone Inez Harriman 27 July 2018

I enjoyed your neat little poem and marveled at the gorgeous snails in your picture. You got me thinking about the emotions of a snail too...lol.

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Seamus O Brian 07 July 2017

I admire your obvious joy in writing. Your passion gives you a freedom to explore in writing, to take chances and bend the rules. It is very refreshing. Bravo, good poet!

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Elena Sandu 01 October 2016

Wonderful poem, so playful but in the same time so deep! The image of a snail crawl up on the sleeve to me brings the feel of stopping the time. Today when we seem to feed more and more on speed, to observe and befriend a snail feels like a good relax and take of fresh air.

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Christopher Tye 30 September 2016

Wonderful poem, Snails are really amazing creatures if we take the time to study them.

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Tom Billsborough 07 June 2016

Beautiful melody in your verse and great content. Love the pictures. I think we've got one in the house. saw a trail this morning. There is a fine poem about a snail by the french poet, Francis Ponge. I might translate it soon. I'll put you on Favourite poets@ list so I get notice of any new poems you submit. Tom Billsborough

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Brian Mayo 03 March 2016

Your poem is original, funny, and creative. With this entry, surely, a poem has now been written about every subject under the sun.

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Rajnish Manga 01 March 2016

Lovely little poem and rarest of the rare ode to a snail. Thank you for sharing, Mdm.

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Aarzoo Mehek 01 March 2016

awwwww such a cute poem. keep sharing.

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Wahab Abdul 01 March 2016

nice one my dear poet, like it, keep writing...

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