Saturday, February 28, 2009

! Ode To A Rock Comments

Rating: 2.9

Stoically you lay there intermingled with the sand,
Impervious to all that comes your way -
The rain and snow don't bother you, annoyances at best
Your skin is strong - it toughens every day;
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Ben Gieske 07 August 2009

Very interesting choice of subject and approach. I like these lines - very expressive of our own lives: If someone wants to touch you, you'll be there; Though deep inside you sparkle like a diamond in the sun -

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Yelena M. 23 March 2009

This poem is something to treasure! Wonderfully constructed and a very enjoyable, thought-provoking read itself. Best wishes. A.

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Linda Ori

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