Thursday, March 6, 2008

Ode To A Princess Comments

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I would give thee a bed a roses,
But the wind blew it away.
For want of such I give thee poises,
Yet they ever so quickly fade.
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Orran Ainmire
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Sreelekha Premjit 07 March 2008

you needn't be apologetic about your poem. its so beautifully written. If there was no romance what do we romantics live on? Your princess is indeed lucky to have you as a lover.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 07 March 2008

a marvellous writes.........ride on........

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Orran Ainmire 07 March 2008

To all who take the time to view my poem: I'm aware it's rather cliche. I wrote it a long time ago while I was still a romantic, but I felt I needed to add something even if it isn't held in very high regard. Well, whatever you may think, don't hesitate to speak your minds.

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