I would give thee a bed a roses,
But the wind blew it away.
For want of such I give thee poises,
Yet they ever so quickly fade.
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To all who take the time to view my poem: I'm aware it's rather cliche. I wrote it a long time ago while I was still a romantic, but I felt I needed to add something even if it isn't held in very high regard. Well, whatever you may think, don't hesitate to speak your minds.
you needn't be apologetic about your poem. its so beautifully written. If there was no romance what do we romantics live on? Your princess is indeed lucky to have you as a lover.