Ode To A Pencil Comments

I feel that if one can write about a pencil, then one can write about anything. I myself, have to be impassioned about something to write about it. And I have not too often been, impassioned about a pencil. Except to get angry that it kept on breaking. LOL.. Good Write..

As economical and crisp as a line drawn with a good pencil, Sidi. There's a hint of Betjeman in the affectionate wit and the boundless flow.

I don't understand why someone gave you such a low rating as 1. I gave you 8 which brought it up to 4.5. People should say what they don't like rather than give good poetry such low ratings. I enjoyed this very much.