'Oh sweet breath of eternal life
Dance ever `pon her silent breast
Released from pain and worldly strife
The one I love is laid to rest'
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Love is ever sweet and love resides with beauty of memory. The teardrops glistened on his cheeks still bloom in eyes. An emotional poem is very beautifully and brilliantly penned.10
Very touching poem, yet well brought from a hurting heart.... Thanks for sharing this poem with us all
An old write, but pleased you liked this Tom, many thanks for reading.
WoW! Val.. this is an astonishing piece of work. it goes on my favourite poems' list right away. Once again your handling of rhythm is superb. Others could learn a lot from reading your verse. I know I could. The subject matter is very good too. Tom Billsborough
Very touching... Soon death will b no more, and we may see our loved ones again. It doesn't cost a thing to read this poem over and over again. Thanks
full of emotions..... sad but beautifully expressed...death is inevitable but most a times it takes awy those we least expect...hmmmm...never too late to share in your loss...
Congratulation Valerie nice poem as an ode thank you
What a tragedy that cuts short a young life! A beautiful piece nonetheless. Thanks!
At long last, my kindred spirit found..... for such words as these, poetry dance! With mine heart whisked away, as my tongue quakes to say: such saddened feel, this lost romance! Intensely beautiful. So glad to have found you Valerie. For so long I have felt alone in the world of classical poetry. I must agree with Achill below - this is certainly a masterpiece.....
A very touching and tender poem. Death can take its toll on loved ones left behind. Yet there are still memories to cherish. Loved this.
A very touching and tender poem. Death can take its toll on loved ones left behind. Yet there are still memories to cherish. Loved this.
'I`ll ne`er forget her tender smile Nor yet her face so sweet and fair Her gentle kisses to beguile I`ll cherish every thought of her' A very beautiful poem on departure of a loved one and cherishing the memories.Well expressed Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
'I`ll ne`er forget her tender smile Nor yet her face so sweet and fair Her gentle kisses to beguile I`ll cherish every thought of her' A very beautiful poem on departure of a loved one and cherishing the memories.Well expressed Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Valerie! Back again on poemhunter and this wonderful poem greets me welcome.