Saturday, June 14, 2008

Ode To A Girl Druggist Comments

Rating: 5.0

On your nostril a piercing sparkles between contraceptive and aspirin.
You've middle long red curls, pale face, a little dear bulbous nose;
Green eyes, a stroke of shadow eye and sharp chin;
A white ironed coat but naked forearms, a badge with a snake.
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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello
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Sadiqullah Khan 26 September 2008

I feel i am looking from a window in some dark street of medieval times, , like painting the picture is drawn in detail, , , it is simply modern, , there is much in the interaction between the artist and the subject, , , much subtle thinking going on independently, , ,

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Vincent James Turner 14 July 2008

i am really loving your work, you are a fantastic poet of observation and your control of emotion and description is admirable. i love the scenes you document they are in a way like little movies regardo Vincent

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Onelia Avelar 14 June 2008

Encounters from daily life through the eyes of a poet, becoming lovely odes. Romantics are dead. Long live the romantics!

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