Ode To A Frozen Timepiece Comments

Kelly-Outstanding work-of all the many lines that I love, fitting together like the movements of an old clock, I think I best love....Possessed are we of sweet decrees, the locks of album hair....love the little details that mark the passing time and memories kept alive. I also think the Roman numerals at the head of each stanza is a nice clock face touch. Phillip

wow, I am put to shame. Bravo