Tuesday, August 12, 2008

Ode To A Dormouse Comments

Rating: 5.0

So quietly he sat in his dark cardboard house,
that very few knew of this modest dormouse.
Yet his presence was felt by all who knew him,
and loyally we'd fill his little bowl to the rim.
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Kim Schilling
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Bill Grace 07 September 2008

A wonderful bit of poetry on which to end what has been quite a good day in Texas. Blessings and will look forward to reading more. Bill Grace

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Dawn Slanker 19 August 2008

Such a touching and sweet poetic story beautifully written. 11 years is an amazing life span. You must have be an exceptional parent to your little furry child.

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Kris Smith 19 August 2008

Liked this full of charm will read more of your work Chris 10 thanks

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J Lee 18 August 2008

i like this. a poem that say a lot i know love, life, death, and many other feeling i can't name i don't like this kind of long poem much only read the first 1 or 2 line & i quit.

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James Foulk 14 August 2008

this was a wonderful piece of poetry, real cute. I will check out your web site and read some of your poems. you should check out the rest of my poems here and i have some on poetrysoup around 370 or so. you are a gifted poet and i will check on your poems.

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Sparklle Rainne 14 August 2008

I like this one a lot! It's cute in a more mature, more professional way.

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