Friday, October 23, 2009

Ode To A Dandelion Comments

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Chameleon on green rustic fields ye lie
unplanted rosette by young hands that pluck
away thy priestly crown, from orient grown,
gold tiara gracing thy perennial brow.
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Lorenzo Costigliolo
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Tai Chi Italy 23 October 2009

Errrmmmmmm! Am I in the presence of a god of poetics? lol This is fantastic reincarnation otherwise! As a child, and even sometime now, we blow the poor seads away to prove our love is true! You would not believe the script scene I wrote tonight! ! ! stunning sync. You describe the Dandelion and it's beautifully freeing fate, so well. Thank you, and I am sure our classic bards are smiling down on you Tai, with much appreciation in my smile

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