Thursday, November 21, 2019

Ode On Old Virtues - I Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ode on old virtues - I

O Virtue, an old wine of vague value,
Admired art thou by vintners nary more,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 December 2019

Most appreciated this mesmerizing poem of Ode on old virtues. I have enjoyed a very lot this well captured Ode, Sir! I have no favourite lines nor words, this entire poem is tremendously perfectly worded. A 10 Full Scre and much much more, Aniruddha Sir! Up to MyPoemList!

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 December 2019

I am overwhelmed with your kind words on the poem dear poet, thank you so much. But I am a bit puzzled with half a poem (only the second part) becoming a members' POD. Part I and II are not natural divisions and only Part II appears abrupt.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 November 2019

A magnificent ode sir! The two lines I liked most from this part are: " Careers are made, unmade by latest hit, Best sellers lone take authors to the crest" ......excellent penmanship! Full marks!

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 November 2019

A magnificent ode sir! ... excellent penmanship... May be, Magnificent feedback, without doubt. Thanks indeed

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