He fervidly inspects he's surely distracted
His mind and soul are unevenly distributed
His corporal self rests in a roseless bed
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If you survive the beginning, you usually survive. But I guess sometimes divorce becomes inevitable. Thoughtful write! I am sure your friend will like it.
I wonder how people can separate after years and years together. The beginning of marriage is the hardest
Your brilliant pen has addressed a sad situation, with beauty and compassion.5 stars.
A very interesting story, but with a sad ending. Such a shame to break the marriage, it turns out they still love each other. Beautiful poem Dr. Swain. Top Marks!
This is really sad. Sometimes opinions differ and couples have to take extreme step. Nicely written.
" In one ear, he listens to her sweet whisper Another ear gets him the song of despair " very poignant picture..
2) after marriage, each will realise that he /she is not married to the designer girl/boy he/she had met befo
Love is blind, they say. When in love, one notices everything good about the other, but does not notice anything otherwise. It is as if a designer girl meets a designer boy..
Being a Lawyer I am destined to see many couples got separated and many children lost either father or mother through the separation of their parents. A rare poem with high calibrated emotions stuck with it. Exasperatingly brilliant write depicting the horrors of divorce. .