Tuesday, March 21, 2023

Ode On My Friend's Divorce Comments

Rating: 5.0

He fervidly inspects he's surely distracted
His mind and soul are unevenly distributed

His corporal self rests in a roseless bed
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Dr Dillip K Swain
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PREMKUMAR C N 29 November 2023

Being a Lawyer I am destined to see many couples got separated and many children lost either father or mother through the separation of their parents. A rare poem with high calibrated emotions stuck with it. Exasperatingly brilliant write depicting the horrors of divorce. .

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Nosheen Irfan 23 March 2023

If you survive the beginning, you usually survive. But I guess sometimes divorce becomes inevitable. Thoughtful write! I am sure your friend will like it.

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Nosheen Irfan 23 March 2023

I wonder how people can separate after years and years together. The beginning of marriage is the hardest

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 22 March 2023

Your brilliant pen has addressed a sad situation, with beauty and compassion.5 stars.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 March 2023

A very interesting story, but with a sad ending. Such a shame to break the marriage, it turns out they still love each other. Beautiful poem Dr. Swain. Top Marks!

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Annie Hines 22 March 2023

Beautiful

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 March 2023

This is really sad. Sometimes opinions differ and couples have to take extreme step. Nicely written.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 21 March 2023

Very sad Dillip I hope yr friend finds happiness

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" In one ear, he listens to her sweet whisper Another ear gets him the song of despair " very poignant picture..

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2) after marriage, each will realise that he /she is not married to the designer girl/boy he/she had met befo

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Love is blind, they say. When in love, one notices everything good about the other, but does not notice anything otherwise. It is as if a designer girl meets a designer boy..

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 21 March 2023

beautiful ode to the friend

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Dr Dillip K Swain

Dr Dillip K Swain

Jamphar, Machhagaon
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