Tuesday, February 19, 2019

Ode On Love And Hate Comments

Rating: 5.0

O thou life's twain called love and hate,
What if I see you separate?
Love would be prime— no predicate,
Under the garb of love can hide no hate.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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M Asim Nehal 24 February 2019

Outstanding poem, As Dr. Dillip said this is one of the most difficult forms of poetry but you did full justice to it. I quote my pick from your poem: Awesome 10+++ Love's born if of faith, so is hate, Love lives on hope; hate's no such fate, Lacking trust, hate enters rear gate, Ye both still suffer an uncertain state.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 February 2019

It takes a lot of time, such poems. But when you receive such encouraging feedback, you feel the labour was well invested. Thank you indeed, Mohammad Nehal.

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Savita Tyagi 21 February 2019

Amazing! A poem of super excellence. Love and hate both part of life, have their own expiration date. One’s presence we enjoy other’s need to be abhore and endured. Loved the last verse. Thank you for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 February 2019

I always look forward to feedback from some poets like you, and when they come a day is done as if. Thank you so much Savita Tyagi.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 February 2019

Ode is one of the most difficult forms of poetry though I love this form! This is a unique Ode on hate and love so beautifully composed! ! The last two lines are my favorite lines: " And yet, the day love's drained of hate/Purest, it now reaches the highest state" .....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 February 2019

Thank you Dr Swain, you may if you wish visit some of my odes, and give your valuable feedback.

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