Thursday, March 27, 2014

Ode On ‘ A Little You’ Comments

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I remember the day you were born;
The creeping shadows on the lawn.
The vermillion glow on western snow;
The snow of clouds on monsoon flow.
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Chinedu Dike 17 June 2015

Piece of great elegance powerfully penned with conviction. A beautiful narrative depicting the joys and anguish of a parent and a child from birth to adulthood. Initially a blissful journey which later became deplorable, as it was fraught with stumbling blocks. I like the heightened poetic diction of the poem. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing.

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Salini Nair 27 March 2014

so Rhythmic, like it

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