Sunday, January 10, 2016

Ode: Noiselessness Comments

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Silence grew quiet
under the charms
of a book keeper.
Death, is this sounding.
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Lihle Shezi
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Ernest Makuakua 21 January 2016

My thoughts are too proud, thou this kist of silence keeps this planet spining, my head is a planet planted by the sea breeze of this noiselessness. please keep writing enjoying your poems emotion moving thanks for sharing

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 January 2016

spining, my head is a planet planted by the sea breeze of this noiselessness. a very nice poem with special kind of thoughts. thank you. tony

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