Monday, July 7, 2014

Ode Comments

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You went without a warning thus
And left my soul to time and dust
A thing so pure that once blossom and bud
Is now sadly, a dried up pod
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Cheryl Griffith
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Colleen Courtney 10 July 2014

Oh my! You were so right Cheryl! It reminds me of my poem Past Beauty so much! This is exactly all I was feeling when writing that poem! You've conveyed that whole gamut of mixed emotions and feelings so perfectly. Thank you for bringing this poem to my attention. Have added to my favorites list so when those feelings come around I can reread and know I am not alone. Have added you to my poets list also. I always say, oh, I need to remember to go back and read this persons work and then I forget.... aging works on the brain also! Lol.

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