Ode 4 Comments

powerful poetic imagery with a message. Nice gift.

At least it wasn't your imagination, I hear them console I touch those loveshakes now on the whole How they do curse and deny the War The endurance of primal savagery so far excellent idea..........10++++++++++

For a lost Atlantis that leaves no sign That one might trace the form above the line great lines by the way, your rhymings are so good because they are not forced. I wish someday I'll have poetic expressions, poetic language, poetic appeal, poetic approach, poetic patterns, and poetic words!

The more I read of your writing; the more I see an incredible imagination at work, and though seeming to follow imaginary lines, it speaks in it's colorful, careful love of words.