Sunday, November 1, 2009

Ode 3 Comments

Rating: 4.8

Their blessed scars shall be admired
Nor the Hellenic tears, the rivers, be dried
That artillery redeems the desire's disgrace
When hell's last chain tortures and they face
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Marieta Maglas 04 November 2009

When at last they challenged poisonous hearts to the fray And in a League of Truth, The Almighty God grant they may 10+++++++++

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Seema Chowdhury 03 November 2009

hi ahmad, thanks for sharing your nice poems. recently i've marked your poem style has changed. its good to read them. take care

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Noel Horlanda 02 November 2009

based on my observation, the rhymes is strong, it's quite perfect, flawless, smooth and rhythmic. Excellent!

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Sonya Florentino 01 November 2009

'White against black of storm' i must say, you have some wonderful lines in here...

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Patti Masterman 01 November 2009

Lot's of poetic light and movement in this graceful writing..(smile)

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Ruerd Visser 01 November 2009

receive the fellowship of love-giving Well said i hope we all receive this fellowship! Boomwhisperer Ruerd

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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