Ode 2 Comments

shanghai is fascinating! ! i watched a documentary about it....and other places in china...hope i can visit it..

In Empress Wu Ze Tian's unique coronet she weareth An ancient satue in her arms she beareth 10++++++++

The musky heaviness in the imagery and language of the poem intrigues me.10.

Ok... It's making a bit more sense to me now... These Ode(s) are really an Epic Ballad and I guess one has to read the whole thing to see what its about...Right? ... Again, This is flowing poetry: The Words are exquisite, have to get to the story tho (smile) ... MoonBee

choice of words could raised eyebrows, the lines has to be analyzed deeply in order to get the real meaning, sometimes it's melodious and sometimes it makes you dreamy.

Why is it that I'm always grateful to be the first to comment in good poems? wow. very very very good sir.