Ode 1 Comments

A melodious, colourful and perfumed ode, literally poetic.10

hi again! ! ! how are you shiddiqi? ? how is your life....it's nice to read your new poems......ode1-10 super terrific as obed said! ! ...thanks for sharing..

some esoteric longing and yearning pride or humility, not sure but certainly an Ode to make one ponder.

''Their jasmines, the sweetness of fragile minds And each silence journey a drawing-down of blinds Our gold in hole of sorrow, our wills in storm Touch at Sor Juana Ines de la Cruz which deny thy harm '' 10++++++++

Lovely Flow of Verses... Loved The Last Two Stanzas Especially... (Is The Ode To Soldiers Returning from Battle? Anyways, Poetical Form is Nice... MoonBee

Pretty deep stuff---

This is carefully written and I think this piece is super except the second line in the first stanza to me seems weak for it doesn't follow the first line. The rhyme word I mean. Overall observation the thought of this piece is quite confusing. Anyway, the author work hard for its publication.

Ahmad, I have to go along with Sally, I don't understand the entire meaning of your poem, only spots do I unterstand. I cannot comment intelligently about it. Thanks for the invite. Lynn

very good. I have just finished reading ode 1-10. This one is the last one and over-all, I can say that all of them are super terrific, cool, and awesome or in Filipino 'cool words', ASTIG!

Brave soldiers efforts against stormy journey with sure deaths is wonderful to inspire courage!

I don't really uderstand this, but the wording is beautiful.