Sang yodels a romantic bard
On his love’s round buttocks
Few years afterwards
Rued at those skin-sacks
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I liked this one very much-a nice way of reminding us how poetry needs to be grounded sometimes, or necessarily grounds itself. The pace and imagery are crisp. Thanks.
my blank note sheet... yes this is what life is all about and we are all writers who use our mighty pen to create history and nostalgic memories for tomorrow. well said.
Like this everyone is a poet in his or her own way in every field.
i like this poem even though i find it a little hard to understand and follow at parts yet it paints such a beautiful picture of poets soul u make it seam so beautiful
Inspiring poem about the poet's soul, voice andwhat we harvest with our poetry.if all the world had the breaking heart of a poet and felt those sorrows and truths of life could we make life better? Or should we be complacent with our own? Lovely a ten.
Sathya, keep sowing your letter seeds that appeal for a much fairer world for all. Your poetry is superb, your plea's much needed lets hope for a leveling off of the hills of greed. Bob
An original mind is definately at work here. Your last lines are especially effective. Excellent work. Warm regards, Sandra
The great carnage of poor, poet shed tear for them, All his senses aching Soaked in lamentation Of his own kith and kin The poor and downtrodden
Poetry is some tools but juz ain't enough to transform third world into first!
really a fine piece! compact composition...thoughtful......10++++
Beautiful and evocative poem. The finishing lines are stupendous
This is a very interesting and metaphysical poem, sathya, a poem that artists and poets can feel and appreciate far more than average readers can. It vividly describes the essence of creativity as artists and poets often feel it. Carl.
This is an amazing poem! ! ! I really liked the ending, keep writing! !
Wow, you are definitely not an ODD POET... You are a TRUE POET... Which is a rarity these days, but you are one of the chosen ones... God bless you...
a very moving poem. every poet is entitled to choose what he wants to write about. it depends on what we focus on. your poetry is your quest, expression of your unrest. heartfelt expression from a tender, compassionate soul.10+
I liked this one very much-a nice way of reminding us how poetry needs to be grounded sometimes, or necessarily grounds itself. The pace and imagery are crisp. Thanks.