Friday, October 10, 2008

Odd Poet Comments

Rating: 4.7

Sang yodels a romantic bard
On his love’s round buttocks
Few years afterwards
Rued at those skin-sacks
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Sathya Narayana
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Hans Ostrom 01 November 2008

I liked this one very much-a nice way of reminding us how poetry needs to be grounded sometimes, or necessarily grounds itself. The pace and imagery are crisp. Thanks.

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Hans Ostrom 01 November 2008

I liked this one very much-a nice way of reminding us how poetry needs to be grounded sometimes, or necessarily grounds itself. The pace and imagery are crisp. Thanks.

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Seema Chowdhury 25 October 2008

my blank note sheet... yes this is what life is all about and we are all writers who use our mighty pen to create history and nostalgic memories for tomorrow. well said.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 24 October 2008

Like this everyone is a poet in his or her own way in every field.

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Layla Joseph 20 October 2008

i like this poem even though i find it a little hard to understand and follow at parts yet it paints such a beautiful picture of poets soul u make it seam so beautiful

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Inspiring poem about the poet's soul, voice andwhat we harvest with our poetry.if all the world had the breaking heart of a poet and felt those sorrows and truths of life could we make life better? Or should we be complacent with our own? Lovely a ten.

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Bob Blackwell 18 October 2008

Sathya, keep sowing your letter seeds that appeal for a much fairer world for all. Your poetry is superb, your plea's much needed lets hope for a leveling off of the hills of greed. Bob

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Dr. Ram Sharma 17 October 2008

a good poem full of imagery. Last lines are marvellous

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Sandra Fowler 17 October 2008

An original mind is definately at work here. Your last lines are especially effective. Excellent work. Warm regards, Sandra

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Kee Thampi 17 October 2008

The great carnage of poor, poet shed tear for them, All his senses aching Soaked in lamentation Of his own kith and kin The poor and downtrodden

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 October 2008

Poetry is some tools but juz ain't enough to transform third world into first!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 16 October 2008

really a fine piece! compact composition...thoughtful......10++++

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James Timothy Jarrett 15 October 2008

Beautiful and evocative poem. The finishing lines are stupendous

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Asef Fakih 14 October 2008

I wish I knew like pain you.

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Reshma Ramesh 14 October 2008

goodness.........loved it!

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Egi David Perdana 14 October 2008

this a just great poems, a great touch thanx

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Carl Harris 13 October 2008

This is a very interesting and metaphysical poem, sathya, a poem that artists and poets can feel and appreciate far more than average readers can. It vividly describes the essence of creativity as artists and poets often feel it. Carl.

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Ozzy Govea 13 October 2008

This is an amazing poem! ! ! I really liked the ending, keep writing! !

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Dr Kamran Haider 13 October 2008

Wow, you are definitely not an ODD POET... You are a TRUE POET... Which is a rarity these days, but you are one of the chosen ones... God bless you...

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Mamta Agarwal 12 October 2008

a very moving poem. every poet is entitled to choose what he wants to write about. it depends on what we focus on. your poetry is your quest, expression of your unrest. heartfelt expression from a tender, compassionate soul.10+

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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