Monday, August 14, 2006

October Night Comments

Rating: 3.0

I was a youngster - a girl in my teens,
He was captain of the school football team -
The month of October, full moon shining bright,
An old fashioned hayride on a Saturday night;
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Linda Ori
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Barry Van Allen 17 March 2007

Linda, I guess that everyone was wrong! You CAN go back again! ... and don't we all want to? The grass is greener as the years go by! B.V.A.

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Not a member No 4 05 March 2007

Was there ever a time like it? Youth and love - such a deadly wonderful combination. This is a very fine recreation of the excitement of the night. Obviously still a clearly etched memory when you manage to make it so vivid for the reader. How soon those special moments are over though, disappearing like flowers floating downstream. Lovely poem Linda. xx jim

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 14 August 2006

WHAT A PLEASANT SURPRISE THAT MUST HAVE BEEN....OCTOBER NIGHT TO MIDNIGHT....STILL NOCTERNAL AFTER ALL THESE YEARS...HOPE YOU HAD A HAPPY BIRTHDAY, MIDNIGHT....AND JUDGING FROM THIS POEM, IT APPEARS YOU DID INDEED...GOT YOUR MESSAGE AS I TAPPED INTO PH LATE, LATE SATpm...& thank you...I like this Poem a lot...Talk to you later ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR

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Duncan Wyllie 14 August 2006

Dear Linda This is such a great poem, and as Celine Dion said'It's all coming back to me now', this reminded me so much of that song Brilliant Love duncan X

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Nalini Hebbar 14 August 2006

WOW! ! ! ...lucky you! ...after so many years! ! ! ...love...nalini

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