October Leaves Comments
As I look out upon October leaves
And brown grass weathered by the Autumn sun
I see the shafts of light a bare branch cleaves
And so much of creation now undone
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(Third time to post this comment) Excellent writing with deep thoughts of wisdom.
(Second posted comment -the first one got lost again) Excellent writing with deep thoughts of wisdom.
A really lovely poem - flows and rhymes beautifully. Great stuff.
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7/27/2025 6:36:59 PM # 1.0.0
Nice. One small word/spelling correction - the word you want is the adjectivedour not the noun dower.