Sunday, October 3, 2021

October Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's change in the air
Crisp to the touch
Dry to the skin
Something is there: a weight
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Nosheen Irfan
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Cowboy Ron Williams 01 November 2021

A wonderful poem full of mystery!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 October 2021

New beginnings in October, very impressivekly worded.5 Stars full for this sterling poem. To my Favourites!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 04 October 2021

Thank you dear Nosheen for this lovely poem with a beautiful image. Hundred stars!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 04 October 2021

A marvellous poem from a marvellous Poetess makes the heart sing with joy.

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Bharati Nayak 03 October 2021

Eyes see goodbyes Heart sees new beginnings.---What a marvelous closing lines!

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Bharati Nayak 03 October 2021

Something is there: a weight Like a love not declared Like a letter not dispatched Some change is happening In hushed tones In unstressed syllables Leaves are set to fall---Powerful expression of a softer emotion--

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 October 2021

Beautiful write. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 October 2021

Leaves are set to fall.... hushed tones... unstressed syllables.... beautifully placed at their respective positions. A fantastic poem!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 October 2021

A vivid depiction of change embellished with great images. Beautifully written.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 October 2021

This poem mesmerizes me.5 Stars full. Amazing poem!

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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