Oceanus Wakes (A Pretentious Name From The Drop Of A Hat) Comments
Blind is the ocean to the sound of its motion
As it roars with momentum of immeasurable melody
Ushering its whitecaps of sinuous elocution
Against the gold Shorelines with foam balm fidelity
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Blind is the ocean to the sound of its roar... brilliant expression with great philosophocal intensity. An insightful piece of poetry!
A beautiful poem never ceases to enchant. Its wonderful words and powerful images always draw a reader to go through with the whole write no matter how many tomes it was read. A poetic gem. Congratulations again, Kevin for a well deserved accolade.
Very pleasant reading experience. Listed as a sonnet. Follows rhyme pattern (roughly) of Shakespearean sonnet. Has some near-rhymes and some part-rhymes. Any 14-line poem is technically a sonnet, true, but to be a TRUE Shakespearean sonnet, you must have only 10 syllables per line, and the meter must be iambic pentameter. Still, as I said, pleasant to read. Congratulations, Earthling.
Such a lovely lyrical poem. Congratulations on Poem of the Day!
Some lovely lyrical lines in this poem... congratulations on Poem of the Day...
Are just the marginal lines of material sinew That draws reciprocity from once spiritual hearth And the sky sits clear, deaf to these great sights As I stand gazing awestruck to this arena of Delight..... awestruck in delight. tony
exquisite extraordinary words vibes from withIN as deep as is the ocean lovely KEVIN
Your imagery astounds the mind from the first line to the last, a blast Wonderful poetry. Thank you for commenting on Faceless Faces.
Grazing the vanishing points that single heaven and earth Are just the marginal lines of material sinew That draws reciprocity from once spiritual hearth..... to this arena of Delight.....outstanding conceptualization. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the member poem of POD.
Grazing the vanishing points that single heaven and earth Are just the marginal lines of material sinew GREAT WRITE; GREAT 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
What great delight to read this poem loud! Thank you dear poet, did it again, your share helped my soul dance!
The word choice in this is scrumptiously sensual. Congratulations for winning this recognition- it was well deserved!
Well I don't know if its a jewel doug! but thank you very much, I hoped you enjoyed it!
Thank you so much Bill! its an old, old work, it was me trying to mess around with Sonnets, hope you enjoyed it!
Today, from wherr I am, it is thundering and the sky is weeping with huge tears and lightning seems to tear the sky, but reading this poem gives me the privilege to be outside and enjoy the ocean. The wonder of Poetry! 10+++++++and onto my Poem List. Congratulations, Kevin for a truly well deserved accolade.
Rose Marie your one of the writers that I keep coming back to check out, for their form and depth, so I am greatly honoured that you read my work. Its an OLD one that I am surprised got resurrected for today, but its nice to see the dust off. Hope you enjoyed!
Liked these lines, to wit: " Grazing the vanishing points that single heaven and earth." " The sky sits clear, deaf to these great sights." You have brought the readers to the vastness of the ocean at close range and feel the joy and wonders that it brings.
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7/19/2025 1:21:41 AM # 1.0.0
Wow! Inspiring me to work on a new poem.