Tuesday, January 19, 2010

Oceans Of Gold Comments

Rating: 4.5

Like the lines of your hands
They came without alerts
Something's alone from a tree
Which gives no more fruits
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Mohammed Hassan (Piracy In The Mediterranean)
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Rania Hammoud 20 January 2010

Hi m7ammad.well done. I liked most these lines Be aware the Oceans of Gold They will lead you to stand a cold embrace To be holding your faith That's what left behind For the rest inside Keep on writing

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Reem Ehab 20 January 2010

Great one! ! Interesting too, you have a great talent. Hope you do better and better.... waiting for more..

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Merna Ibrahim 19 January 2010

Nice poem Mohammed...keep it up poet friend :) Merna

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