Oceans Comments

Nice, power-packed poem. Top score, dear poet

3) and again, " What I love most is its motion, and how it reflects the sun and the moon." the wavy motion on the surface and strong currents in the deep like the Gulf Stream… resulting in the monsoons rains all over the Indian sub continent….

2) " the ocean has issues …..the way the ocean lets the moon and air push it around." loved it.

Very beautifully written. Captured my heart as a first-hand experience. As my own experience. A lot of observations, facts, science, and sublime poetry.