Wednesday, April 19, 2017

Oceanic Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am the infinite ocean of love
Rivulets merge into rivers
The rivers to me flow
meandering dance
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C. P. Sharma
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 25 April 2017

Oceanic love is a poem that expresses infinite love in a very sublime way. The love that merges with the rivers, dances in sunshine, kissing the sky, flying around hills and dales. A wonderful imagery! My heart with pleasure fills - echoes William Wordsworth's line in the Daffodils. Enjoyed the visual that the words portrayed in the poem.10+++

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 25 April 2017

picture perfect poem depicts the beauty of nature... lovingly, thanks poet

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Richard Wlodarski 25 April 2017

Such vivid imagery allowing one to meditate on the expanse and glory of the infinite universe. What a pleasure it was to read and to visualize. Truly worthy of Poem Of The Day. Congratulations!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 April 2017

In the sunshine glow..... congrats on being selected....

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C. P. Sharma 25 April 2017

Thank you very much for support and appreciation, Richard.

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 April 2017

Beautiful poem with a strong imagery. Photo is nice too. Congrats.

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C. P. Sharma 25 April 2017

Thank you for appreciation, Anil Panda ji.

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Udaya R. Tennakoon 25 April 2017

imaginary conception for love... well written structure.. best

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Very inspirational poem about love and life...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 April 2017

A beautiful poem with thrilling expression. Thanks for sharing.....10

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Savita Tyagi 25 April 2017

Eautidul poem with magnificent imagery. Congratulations for member poem of the day.

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Ramesh T A 25 April 2017

Congratulationsto you for having been selected for Poem of the Day from Member Poems of Poemhunter.com!

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Clarence Prince 25 April 2017

I downpour love with loud drum beats. That sounds good!

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Jeremy Farmer 25 April 2017

Superb imagery making a beautiful poem. A joy to read

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Ila Manish 25 April 2017

Beautiful poem...love the imagery

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Bharati Nayak 25 April 2017

The merger and expansion of life force so beautifully expressed through arrangement of words both visually and literally.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 April 2017

Ocean of love! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rajnish Manga 25 April 2017

The whole cycle of formation of cloud and rain is nicely articulated and likened to the shower of love. Congrats for your selection today and thanks for sharing this lovely poem. I downpour love with loud drum beats.

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Nicole Anne Sia 25 April 2017

Heartfelt poem. Well done, Sir.

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Kim Barney 25 April 2017

Beautiful picture to accompany a very pleasing poem. I like how the line lengths go from long to short and back to ling again. Very well done, and congrats on having it selected as poem of the day!

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