Sunday, October 3, 2021

Oceanic Feeling Comments

Rating: 5.0

Blue and white dreams drift
In and out of consciousness.
They ebb and flow like
The ocean until all's one.
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 October 2021

Dreams and tides compared and likened wow what a great poem in brevity. Fab muses! Kudos! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, ' squash the hate hate bug'

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