Oceanic Feeling Poem by DM W

Oceanic Feeling

Rating: 5.0


Blue and white dreams drift
In and out of consciousness.
They ebb and flow like
The ocean until all's one.
Grey clouds fade away
To reveal sunnier skies,
And my mind becomes,
Relaxed and still. O such bliss!

Oceanic Feeling
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by Carl Jung
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 October 2021

Dreams and tides compared and likened wow what a great poem in brevity. Fab muses! Kudos! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, ' squash the hate hate bug'

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