Friday, March 28, 2014

Ocean's Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

You woke up with smiling face
When she was holding you
You blushed with golden red
She was sparkling and laughing too.
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Ruma Chaudhuri
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Khairul Ahsan 05 May 2014

A nice imagery of a golden beaming sun, afloat the curly waves of an ocean, held on her bosom in love. An absorbing thought. I have a poem with a similar title (Ocean Of Love) on a different theme though. If you have time, please read it and be kind to say a word or two.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 May 2014

That's like a good baby, nice poem.

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Ruma Chaudhuri

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