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This is beautiful to read

beautiful...the different emotions tied to nature...and the progression to the end is quite magical.....

What a remembrance to savour and imagine..love the structure, too, suits your dream perfectly. Thanks for sharing. Yelena M.

These are very interesting and thought-provoking verses, each almost independent of each other with only the finest strand linking them. Did this start out as a group of linked haiku? only one exceeds the 5/7/5. They read like haiku in that they all have reference to nature, season, and a juxtaposition of two images, leaving the reader some work to do to finish the poem. Am I wrong?

walking to your beauty.............. ectasy of love...... fresh breath did i breath when your wondrous work i read today it enlightened me today more made me see.