When one day missing you becomes unbearable
I will seek you out from deep within the ocean of my memories
Walk on the sands of time till it lead me to your sunkissed shores
Where our journey ended and love will once again be reborn
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Unbelievable beauty and imagery in this piece. It takes the mind and breath away! Excellent work!
Like many others have said, this is beautiful poem Leila... What a picture you paint with beautiful words... andy x 10
Leila, this is certainly one of the best pieces of poetry I have read in a very long time! ! ! Excellent imagery, and very very heartfelt. It describes the true essence of being in love. Always, Nick
Some wonderul imagery Leila, you have cast your words across our screen with a fine tallent displayed Take care Love duncan x
so beautiful and well expressed..as always my dear leila.. wish you all my best.. yours hazem
Hi Leila, definitely I too joined the notions of the two gentlemen who are excellent poets. Yours is one poem that aligned to the writes of Jerry and Wilde... very well expressed with TRULY BEAUTIFUL COLLECTION OF WORDS, and IT IS BREATHTAKING indeed! Another 10 for it.
Leila, I wholeheartedly agree with my good friend Doc, this is a truly beautiful collection of words couched in a poem. Be proud darling girl, you bared your soul and we're forever grateful. Huge hugs, Jerry
I was on that shore. You made it real.