Saturday, August 9, 2008

Ocean Of Emotion Comments

Rating: 4.5

The heavy waves
Crash onto the shore
The deep blue water
Comes back for more
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Allyson Gordon
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Jazib Kamalvi 24 December 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Allyson. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 18 August 2008

I love this one... It's so strong. But better to have a mind like the ocean than of a single half eaten blade of grass... Luv Rissa

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Allyson Gordon

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