Wednesday, October 30, 2013

Ocean Of Desire Comments

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Your soul drags my soul into an ocean of passion.
Your gaze fixes my gaze as we invade each other,
You reach my heart in the frenzy of passion,
I give in with pleasure and watch as you conquer.
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Neera Lollbeeharry
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Chinedu Dike 31 October 2017

Beautiful rendition of words in an absolutely passionate piece of poetry, embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Strong emotions expressed in powerful words. Thanks for sharing Neera.

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Dev Anand 15 August 2017

You reach my heart in the frenzy of passion, love, passion, romance very great themes of poetry of all ages.. thank you dear poetess. dev

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Neera Lollbeeharry 15 August 2017

Thank you Dev for liking my poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 December 2015

Your soul drags my soul into an ocean of passion. Your gaze fixes my gaze as we invade each other, You reach my heart in the frenzy of passion, I give in with pleasure and watch as you conquer. so full of desire and expressive of real passion and love. a perfect poem thank you very much. tony

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Neera Lollbeeharry 11 December 2015

Thank you for this encouraging comment.

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Khairul Ahsan 05 November 2013

This is an awesome poem! Beautiful expression of love and passion. Erotic, and poetic too!

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