Ocean Is One Point Comments

Peeling out emotion! Nice work.

...........beautiful poem and so inspiring...thank you for sharing ★

Self realizes luminous point of star. A lovely fixed expression. Nice one.

This was beautifully written. It stirred my emotions. Lovely writing.

Truly, God is the super light, an ocean at a point, He awakens our wisdom through conscience.

Excellent poem, Bhargabi. Your faith and wisdom are inspiring