Tuesday, March 18, 2014

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Don't turn around
look back,

echoes - never stop!
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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 April 2020

Echos never stop and this is very wonderful. Echos motivate life and we feel the truth. Momentarily simple and lovable waves whisper us. Here own message goes up and down. This poem is excellently penned with beauty of motivation. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely work.

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Liza Sudina 23 May 2016

Interesting style - even want to hear how you read it aloud.

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Adeline Foster 22 July 2015

Didn't catch on right away, Don't know if I do yet. Interesting riddle. Read mine - O Night - Adeline

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Gajanan Mishra 18 March 2014

a window of situation, I like it, thanks. Please read my poems and comment.

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Colleen Courtney 18 March 2014

But when you're in love with what you haven't got-it feels better. Oh how often this is so very true! Nice!

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