James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Tuesday, December 16, 2008

Ocean Forever Deep* Comments

Rating: 5.0

Calm cool waves my soul to sea
softy how they cling to me.
Afterthoughts gradually drifiting
down the bottom swell the top.
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James McLain
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Sarah Moore 10 April 2009

i agree, wonderful imagery. this poems speaks to me as not many do. great job.

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Mimi Fakhira 29 January 2009

I love this one! You made it sound so simple and cool.... you're like a huge wave crashing the shore! Nice descriptions and imagery. Keep it up :)

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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