Ocean As If In A Pot Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Ocean As If In A Pot

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Some say their say in an essay,
Some, in a short story or longer may,
To some a novel length is the way.
But poets need just lines but a few,
And a poet's poet of hue
Fills ocean in a pot or two,
And in a couplet comes to clue,
Sun's brilliance as if in rays but few!
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Reflections |07.04.2019|
Topic:Poet, brevity, tribute

Monday, November 18, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: poet
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Twenty second April (b.1908)was the birth anniversary of a Gujarati poet of renown with a pen-name of Sundaram. He had the ability to say a lot in a few short lines. This piece is a tribute to him.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kingsley Egbukole 18 November 2019

Poets say a lot with few lines. Love your tribute to Gujarati (Sundaram)

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 November 2019

Thanks for visiting with such encouraging feedback dear Kingsley E

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 November 2019

Sir, I identify the fourth line as the kernel of this magnificent work expressed in absolute brevity. Excellent work...10

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 November 2019

Yes, indeed, I've seen some of your poetic expressions, for example. Thanks for your wonderful feedback, Dr Swain.

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Aniruddha Pathak

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Godhra - Gujarat
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