Ocean And Shore (Haiku) Comments

making love in a ceaseless, calm agitation — ocean and the shore - - - - - - -Such a beautiful image of love in perpetuity.

A lovely imagery! When the waves lap on the shore, there is the embrace of two ardent lovers and this romance is perpetuated through this haiku.

You have presented a rich imagery of love in this exquisite and delightful piece .

Brilliant write Mihaela, I could picture the scene so vividly as the ocean and the shore making love is a stunning image!

Love and joy! ! With the muse of nature. Nice work.

Beautiful imagery. Yes, the way the ocean embraces the shore without end is suggestive of a great immortal love. You have captured the passion of the relationship in your beautiful haiku. (10)

A beautiful and well constructed Haiku. Thanks, Mihaela