Sunday, February 25, 2018

Ocean Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tinges and shades of

Bright and dull
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Niranjana Sivam
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Loved the stanza that quotes.. they were now incessant guests, Slowly melted my blue I became crimson. The red invaded and I lost to them, Amazing poem. A great start Niranjana. 10 for the sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 27 February 2018

Well conceived and elegantly brought forth. A lovely creation. Thanks for sharing Niranjana and do remain enriched.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 February 2018

A beautiful poem! My favorite lines: I became crimson/The red invaded and I lost to them/surrendered all enigmas...very well penned....10

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 February 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Niranjana. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.

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