Wednesday, February 17, 2016

Ocean Comments

Rating: 4.7

The Ocean has its Mysterious Peace
You never know what's there
The waves above with gentle wind
& Below with Anonymous care
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Ryson Dsouza
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Yewande Adedokun 09 February 2017

Thanks for your review on my piece. I also want to commend yours on this one. great write up for an ocean, I always want to read about the water body and everything about it being. Thank you for adding to my knowledge.

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Fantastic lines on ocean.

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 February 2016

Ocean, peace, bliss, light, shingin waves, dancing waves, the music of the ocean, . thank your for your wonderful descripitons. tony

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Bharati Nayak 18 February 2016

The ocean has a wonderful bliss Your poem seems to have great depth like ocean. Nice sharing

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Gajanan Mishra 17 February 2016

journey that never ends, go on..

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