Ocean Comments

a very nice potrayal of the ocean and the rocks and seagulls, water lashing the rocks. a great job. thank you

A lovely job! Well done Michelle!

You presented vast ocean on your palm so lucidly, I am mystified. Great!

thoughtful piece, thanks for sharing

beautiful poem... i like it!

Passion and senuality sculpt this savage piece.

Magnifique! You have captured the essence of the ocean with great imagery but above all this magnificent poem conveys the feeling, grandeur and mystery that the sea provokes. Now, thanks to you I can see and feel the sea again.and join the vagrant seagulls there. A true pearl of a poem, to be cherished

Indeed! While with the sea we learn to let her weave us

very fine, I like it, thanks.