Taylor S

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California

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Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Ocean Comments

Rating: ★5.0

A depth of fantoms
Unknown
With life unable to be
Seen
...
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Ronny Self 19 May 2009

I was impressed about how much you managed to portray in such few words. A good write. One thing though: you misspelled 'be' in the third line. A typo, I'm sure, but one that still detracts from the poem. Make sure to fix it, and it will appear even better. Write on. Ronny

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Delicate Heart 19 May 2009

very nice imagery , you become traveler whilst reading, very tender poem.

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