*ocean* Comments

you are so gorgeous by writing such a good poem.come on

Good write! Keep them coming; -) mk

This is a fantastic write.. well done! ! !

The thing that I liked the most were the phrases that you used in your writing. Most people write in words, you write in phrases. This is a wonderful talent to have. It comes naturally to gifted writers. It is clear that you do have a gift. That is the most important thing. The major problem was in the organization of your thoughts. This will come with time and experience. You did well. GW62