Thursday, August 24, 2006

Ocean Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Ocean is very cold,
also it is very bold.
It's one big mass of energy,
that never seems to get old.
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David Darbyshire
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Kelly Neville 24 August 2006

bold cold and very very old... but the experience of taking a dip in, on a warm day, is always new... ~kelly

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Silvia Thomas 24 August 2006

short and sweet Very nicely done!

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Nalini Hebbar 24 August 2006

and will never too...but it has been devouring coastal land....so it is sure getting bigger...and will inundate the earth one day...love...nalini

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