Friday, July 24, 2009

Ocean Comments

Rating: 5.0

Restless, blue-green water
Curling into angry fists
Groping the rocks
Yet coming up empty.
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Cheryl A. Caron
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Lynn Glover 25 July 2009

Cheryl: You had me at the beach enjoying myself. Beautiful write. God speed. Lynn

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Great use of imagery Cheryl....gives it a lovely touch...I could almost hear the waves....great work 10

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Garry Ventura 24 July 2009

I like your description of the ocean, make me feel as if I was there. Have a nice day.

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Cheryl A. Caron

Cheryl A. Caron

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