Wednesday, April 23, 2014

Occasional Visitor! Comments

Rating: 5.0

My dear umbrella where are you...
I searched for you in shops and malls.

This hot and humid Season just waits for you.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Akhtar Jawad 18 June 2014

Umbrella reminded me a beautiful song from Raj Kapoor's move Shree 420. This occasional visitor if colorful adds beauty to the rainy season. A nice poem.

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Vijay Sai R 06 June 2014

umbrella- a tree, wherever we go we can carry...

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Amitava Sur 31 May 2014

A lovely poem praising the umbrella and it's needs.... enjoyed a lot

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A meandering thought on an umbrella make a beautiful poem

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Salini Nair 06 May 2014

though a simple thing its value has been exaggerated and has taken to some other dimensions..like it

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Rajesh Thankappan 01 May 2014

Umbrellas are a great asset especially when we are in the sun or stranded in the rain. Among the great variety of umbrellas, I think, the Japanese variety are the most colourful ones. Anyway, a brilliant poem on an unlikely subject.

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Dinesan Madathil 30 April 2014

I hope you will soon buy a good umbrella..... I am sure you will use it during the rains as well.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 April 2014

An umbrella is a great companion. Saves us from rain and sun. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Ramesh Rai 27 April 2014

I have lost so many umbrellas in my life. So I am very much careful and it is true for me, umbrellas are seasonal visitors.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 26 April 2014

Great imagery and great appreciation for petty things yet looks as pretty as your poems..........Geetha..........

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Valsa George 24 April 2014

Seeing the title, I thought it must be on something else..... You have fooled the readers Geetha... Any way a very interesting write. To an imaginative mind anything can be the subject for a poem.... Enjoyed!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2014

Love for umbrella is appreciated. beautiful love....10 Your prayer is heard The ozone layer is strengthened Now the direct ultra violet rays may not harm you The umbrella may not allow it passing through

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

Kerala Palakkad
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