Monday, January 18, 2016

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Rating: 5.0

Your beauty goes without saying
Intoxicated by your laugh
I can't help but smile
Your lips snarl and pout
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Weldon Davis
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Roseann Shawiak 18 January 2016

Wow! Totally love the emotion pouring from your heart into this wonderfully romantic poem. Seeing all the wonder and goodness that love gives to us, then the melancholy sadness of the inability of not being able to hold on to it, as it is always and only given temporarily to each of us. Poignant and beautifully stated, give it a 10! Thank you so much for sharing it! RoseAnn

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Weldon Davis 18 January 2016

Once again thank you for your gracious review of my poem.. :) ...This was one of those poems that as I wrote it I had one thing in mind, but as it progressed it became about something completely different..The line about walking on broken pencil shards came to me in a dream...as does a lot of my more creative lines in my poetry...

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